hmmm..still pondering if he's really sleeping...sounds very romantic on first read...but as you tagged it with "thriller" there could def. be some goose bump potential... nicely done
dfe feels nice to have that body next to you...as long as it is still giving off heat...you know...smiles....
Cuddly sweet, or something moe going on here?http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/03/14/running-blind/
That reminds me of all the times I laid with my wee daughter so she would go to sleep. Those times she really DID sleep because of me. :)Nice poem!!
Very nice poem, even if it did become a bit chilling at the end. Was he sleeping next to a corpse? Oh I do hope not, now I won't be able to sleep tonight! LOL!http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/03/in-moonlights-vision.html
Pretence or not, the comfort's still there. Nice little read!